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воронворон    日, 20/10/2019 - 23:23

грязно и душит-нервнозначно,если дословно оценивать
как в жизни-выбор

воронворон    日, 20/10/2019 - 23:35

тут во второй (условно)части про озеро особой радости вроде не было

Vera JahnkeVera Jahnke    月, 21/10/2019 - 16:07

[@Alexander]: Funny, I was glad to see that you have put in a new translation, and then I realised - it was one of mine. Thank you so much, good job! 👍 And by the way: I miss your poems! Why do you hide your talent?

[@ворон]: Your first comment - absolutely perfect! 👍 Another possibilty: It is easier to see the other position than the own one...

It was a great pleasure (!) for me to read your comments here. So there is absolutely no need for me to explain anything. And by the way: Sometimes I understand my own stuff after years, you know, like a dream from deep inside...

Vera JahnkeVera Jahnke    火, 22/10/2019 - 16:09

"Не было бы счастья, да несчастье помогло." (русская пословица)
I hope your prosa is as good as your poems!