Hello - Goodbye (러시아어 번역)

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Hello - Goodbye

The summer came - hello - goodbye -
A moment sweet and brief;
One glance, you see a butterfly,
The next, an autumn leaf.
 
투고자: Kevin RainbowKevin Rainbow, 火, 26/10/2021 - 21:57
러시아어 번역러시아어 (metered, 시적, 운율)
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Привет - Пока

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Вот лето вновь - привет - пока -
миг краток и искрист;
взглянул - увидел мотылька,
моргнул - осенний лист.
 
고마워요!
감사 12회 받음
This is a poetic translation - deviations from the meaning of the original are present (extra words, extra or omitted information, substituted concepts).
투고자: PinchusPinchus, 木, 28/10/2021 - 02:48
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O_KO_K    木, 28/10/2021 - 02:58

Класс! Почти дословно и поэтично. Очень понравилось! Спасибо! Regular smile

SpeLiAmSpeLiAm    木, 28/10/2021 - 08:01
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Целиком поддерживаю оценку ребят!

Kevin RainbowKevin Rainbow    木, 28/10/2021 - 22:01

It's encouraging to know you found this little thing worthy of translation. I think it is even better than the original.
"Искрист" definitely seems a better touch in Russian than "sweet' in English. Excellent!

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