Kira, just a few changes

Time has passed by so quietly.
You can't rise up higher.
Dark roofs, slippery roofs...
You see, there, where it's so easy to fall,
In the sky angels are crying about (for) stars, barely breathing

Refrain:
Sometimes it's hard (to let love out into the sky)? like a white dove.
You've been saving it (love)
But you couldn't save it (love)
But it (a dove) will come back again

You'll say, "I should wait for so long"
There is only the moon in the sky
It (the moon) is so lonely
Maybe you can't hear...

The rest are fine.