Swallow Flight (히브리어 번역)

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Swallow Flight

I love my hour of wind and light,
I love men's faces and their eyes,
I love my spirit's veering flight
Like swallows under evening skies.
투고자: Valeriu RautValeriu Raut, 水, 27/10/2021 - 08:54
히브리어 번역히브리어 (시적)
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מעוף הסנונית

את השעה שלי של הרוח והאור אנוכי אוהבת,
את פני הגברים ואת עיניהם אנוכי אוהבת,
את מעוף רוחי המזגזג כמו סנונית
תחת שמי הערב אוהבת אנוכי.
감사 1회 받음
This is a poetic translation - deviations from the meaning of the original are present (extra words, extra or omitted information, substituted concepts).
투고자: IsraelWuIsraelWu, 水, 27/10/2021 - 13:53
The author of translation requested proofreading.
It means that he/she will be happy to receive corrections, suggestions etc about the translation.
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