Прикосновение к Есенину (Prikosnoveniye k Yeseninu) (tłumaczenie na angielski)

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Прикосновение к Есенину

Тихие дома
Улицы все спят
Я запомню эти глаза
Что мне говорят
Свежая листва
Огоньки горят
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Что мне говорят
 
Ой лёли-лёли
 
Васильковых глаз
Первый смелый взгляд
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Что мне говорят
Смятая трава
Песни глухаря
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Было всё не зря.
 
Udostępniono przez Kevin RainbowKevin Rainbow dnia niedz., 17/10/2021 - 16:44
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A Touch to Esenin

Quiet houses,
All the streets sleep,
I will remember these eyes,
What they tell me
Fresh foliage,
Lights shine,
I will remember these words,
What they tell me.
 
Oh lyoli-lyoli1.
 
The first brave glance
Of cornflower blue eyes,
I will remember these eyes
What they tell me
Ruffled grass,
The wood grouse's songs
I will remember these words,
Everything was not in vain.
 
  • 1. A non-lexical vocable often used in Russian and Ukrainian folk songs.
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Udostępniono przez Kevin RainbowKevin Rainbow dnia niedz., 17/10/2021 - 16:44
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YmdeithyddYmdeithydd    sob., 23/10/2021 - 13:47

Hi, does the title suggest that she has had the experience of touching Yesenin in writing the poem? Can see the problem with 'a touch of', but I don't find 'a touch to' idiomatic: maybe just 'touching Yesenin'?

YmdeithyddYmdeithydd    niedz., 24/10/2021 - 11:57

Fair enough. It does sound less odd in combination with a body part.

sandringsandring    niedz., 24/10/2021 - 15:01

Hi, guys.

The word "Прикосновение" is used in its old literary meaning "Homage to Esenin". It's a certain type of poem in Russian literature inspired by another poet's work(s)

Kevin RainbowKevin Rainbow    niedz., 24/10/2021 - 22:03

I am trying to find information about that particular meaning/usage but am not having any luck. Do you know of any dictionary that includes it or some other examples of "прикосновение" meaning "homage"?

YmdeithyddYmdeithydd    pon., 25/10/2021 - 13:16

Not my 1975 Russian-English Dictionary I'm afraid!

Kevin RainbowKevin Rainbow    pon., 25/10/2021 - 20:37

Wiktionary, викисловарь and dic.academic.ru often include older and rarer words, meanings and usages, but I couldn't find one specifically along the lines of "homage" or "type of poem inspired by another poet's work(s)" for "прикосновение". In any case, I trust sandring's judgement. A meaning along the lines of 'homage" definitely seems more fitting.

Dr_IgorDr_Igor    niedz., 24/10/2021 - 22:16

My two cents that kinda make sense.
Another "official " shade of meaning of the word "прикосновение" is "причащение" i.e. communion. Esenin as a deity.

sandringsandring    wt., 26/10/2021 - 07:50

Hi, Kevin.

The word is used in a very peculiar and rare meaning. It's loosely defined here (Second definition)

https://ru.wiktionary.org/wiki/%D0%BF%D1%80%D0%B8%D0%BA%D0%BE%D1%81%D0%B...

But here's how Прикосновение is used in the meaning of "Homage to" in modern Russian.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Bxc6wX1DWSQ

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Sp9ZkMCXygI

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P_PS8Gj8lEE

Here's where a preacher explains the word Причастность as Communion, Homage, Respect, Admiration.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5bfdKmPX-L8

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