Phil Ambro
Willian
wt., 17/05/2022 - 17:33
First, thanks for the transcription of the song. I would like to make some observations, I studied the lyrics of the song to understand the pronunciations and textual understanding, and I did some surveys here. First, referring to the contradiction in two moments, one when he says that he has to leave, another moment when he says that she left him. Maybe in this part, it wouldn't be possible that it's a question of the sound of a sentence being identical, but saying different things, in this case that I'm going to point out now, is it that instead of him saying "Now it's time I must be leaving" he says "Now it's time I must believing", since in other moments of the song he mentions the act of believing? If, in this case, it is the second sentence, there is no contradiction in the singer's speech. At the beginning of the song too, I actually heard it several times and didn't understand him saying "I look at us.
We need to say goodbye.", I understand something like "??? hurts / ??? mean to say goodbye", in fact, I couldn't identify the whole sentence, but some words that I could understand sound the way I wrote it. Finally, in the part of the song that goes like this "We must pray that though we believe." I I understand “We must pray and only believe.” Those were my observations, but I can't say with much propriety, because I'm not a native, I'm in the learning phase, but these were the doubts I had.
Dr_Igor 
Kevin Rainbow
Christian Rock, made by a foreign band whose native language is NOT English, as is obvious due to the weird lyrics.
Of note:
"I found the love WE were looking for"?
either "I found the love I've been looking for"
or "We found the love we've been looking for".
The whole song's construct is weird: He's leaving, but he thinks of her "leaving (his) love"?! Nonsense! He's the one who's leaving.
"Tell me I need." Perhaps this line is wrong because it makes no sense in English, but that sounds like what he's singing.
"we can ENDURE." Sounds strange here to use such a poetic verb in such an otherwise trite song. Just for a rhyme? I don't think a native English speaker would do this, but in songs, who knows. This sounds weird to mix common and haughty verbs together, but things in songs often do. So, overall not too weird, UNTIL...
"the further we can GET." Then he uses a strange common colloquialism that no one would say here. It should be "the further we can GO."
I understand that foreigners learning English have problems with when to use GET and GO. But this should obviously be "GO". People "go further/farther", people don't "get further/farther" unless there's another clause, like "I got further than he did."
Lastly, "We've been too long." makes no sense! Obviously he meant to sing "We've been together too long." Just forgot the word "together".
Anyway, as far as English Christian Rock songs go, this one is pretty bad. Not only trite (which most are, because I mean how many ways can someone sing about Jesus' love?), but also this song is rather stupid. Sorry to say.