Pusara di Lebuhraya (tłumaczenie na angielski)

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Grave on the Highway

On this journey to the destination
Passing through countless highways
My journey paused on this highway
My eyes landed on a quiet grave in solitude
Taking me back to the old times
When you were by my side
Such a festive my life was
Now, love is gone
Buried in solitude
And this grave is the proof
Such a hopeless I was
Watching as love leaving me behind
The utterance started here,
Be fooled
And it killed her
Now you are no longer here
All that is left is a dream
And my love entombed
I continue this journey
Leaving behind the dream
Towards the purpose of eternal love
Such a hopeless I was
Watching as love leaving me behind
The utterance started here,
Be fooled
And it killed her
Now you are no longer here
All that is left is a dream
And my love entombed
I continue this journey
Leaving behind the dream
Towards the purpose of eternal love
Towards the purpose of eternal love
 
Dzięki!
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Udostępniono przez iemaiema dnia śr., 20/10/2021 - 14:30
Dodane w odpowiedzi na prośbę ladybirdladybird
Ostatnio edytowano przez iemaiema dnia niedz., 31/10/2021 - 20:43
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