Português (Brasil)
Igeethecat
Quarta-feira, 30/10/2019 - 04:01
Очень поэтично (не в смысле «отсебятина»)! Good job! 👍
Глазами и душой ( Tradução para Inglês)
Tradução para InglêsInglês (equirhythmic, poetic, rhyming)
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With your passion, with your soul
Pacify me with your passion
Pacify me with your soul
And barefooted step with caution
On my blistered heart so sore
Bring the pain of satisfaction
Scratch my back with fingernails
Come as my rejuvenation
Shine on me through windowpanes
Shine on me through windowpanes
Please embrace me with your passion
Please embrace me with your soul
Just like facing godlike wisdom
I would kneel to you alone
Please embrace me very tightly
Keep me close to your warm breast
This would make far less demanding
To forget and to traverse
To forget and to traverse
Please do kiss me with your passion
Please do kiss me with your soul
To cut fibers in succession
Is more tough than to cut them all
Stems of Life are very fragile
Do not damage them unwise
There's a child somewhere awaken
Seems to me he has my eyes
Seems to me he has my eyes
So pacify me with you passion
Pacify me with you soul
And barefooted step with caution
On my blistered heart so sore
Cause for me you've been an angel
When you're gone, my life is gloom
Say to me: "You my beloved"
And some other word or two
And some other word or two
Adicionado por 
Schnurrbrat em Segunda-feira, 28/10/2019 - 23:31
Schnurrbrat em Segunda-feira, 28/10/2019 - 23:31 Última edição feita por Schnurrbrat em Segunda-feira, 04/11/2019 - 01:01
Schnurrbrat em Segunda-feira, 04/11/2019 - 01:01"Глазами и душой" está nas coleções:
| 1. | Moody |
Chizh & Сo: Maiores 3
| 1. | Na pole tanki grohotali (На поле танки грохотали) |
| 2. | Vot pulya prosvistela (Вот пуля просвистела) |
| 3. | Глазами и душой |
Comentários
Igeethecat
Quarta-feira, 30/10/2019 - 04:01
Pinchus Zelenogorsky
Segunda-feira, 04/11/2019 - 00:23
blistered heart so sore
Круто!
А можно ли вообще "Pacify me with your passion"?
BlackSea4ever
Segunda-feira, 04/11/2019 - 00:32
More often, we'd say console me not pacify me, but translator is the boss
Pinchus Zelenogorsky
Segunda-feira, 04/11/2019 - 00:51
Не, я про то, что можно ли страстью кого-то успокоить
BlackSea4ever
Segunda-feira, 04/11/2019 - 00:59
Ah, yes? As it means passionately love, no?
BlackSea4ever
Segunda-feira, 04/11/2019 - 00:31
How I'm not getting any notifications???
Who would hate you - we love you! Great job!
BlackSea4ever
Segunda-feira, 04/11/2019 - 00:39
If you feel like it:
Come to my rejuvenation -- come AS my ...
Window pane - one word
To cut fibers in succession | Is more tough than to cut them all -- I think strings better, no?
Schnurrbrat
Segunda-feira, 04/11/2019 - 00:59
Hi, guys.
My apologies it is not by Emily. 
BTW Apple TV released Season 1, ten episiodes of "Dickinson" (due to popular demand from PZ and Co.)
1) Pacify me with your passion - I think this line is possible; plus there is a certain repetition, which me think is beneficial. So I'm keeping it.
2) my/as (that sounds funny btw) = let me think of it - imho the meaning is different with these two. O.k. I've changed it.
3) windowpane vs window pane. Likely, you're right, although I could easily find the use as a two word structure. It was/is intentional.
4) I don't like fibers, I like threads. But "fibers" is a two syllable word, which I need for the stress-meter pattern. I remember I spent some considerable time thinking about the word choice there and I couldn't find any better.
Pinchus Zelenogorsky
Segunda-feira, 04/11/2019 - 00:57
Ура!
Pinchus Zelenogorsky
Segunda-feira, 04/11/2019 - 01:20
42, мы ждем Вашего перевода стиха Эмили №42
A Day! Help! Help! Another Day!
Your prayers, oh Passer by!
From such a common ball as this
Might date a Victory!
From marshallings as simple
The flags of nations swang.
Steady—my soul: What issues
Upon thine arrow hang!
vevvev
Segunda-feira, 04/11/2019 - 01:35
Critique is always welcomed (proof-read or not, negative too).