Не улетай ввысь ( Tradução para Inglês)

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Don't ascend high

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Don't ascend too high.
Don't run away too far.
At least as a dream at night -
Tenderly console despair.
Darkness with the arrow wounds.
Wrests a scream from the flesh.
Don't leave like this,
Don't disappear in a flash.
Over the rage of delirium,
Golden words ring louder.
I'm guarding the dream
There, where you are no more.
Don't fly away: know
That without you, the world is barren.
Even the Eden's glow
Won't bring to life the emotions fallen.
With the sands of time
The flames will start to cool
There, where you are no more,
I do not want to exist.
Don't ascend too high.
Don't run away too far.
At least as a dream at night -
Tenderly console despair.
Don't ascend too high.,
Don't run away too far.,
Don't fly away,
Don't run away,
Don't fly away...
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Adicionado por BlackSea4everBlackSea4ever em Sexta-feira, 15/11/2019 - 17:58
Última edição feita por BlackSea4everBlackSea4ever em Domingo, 17/11/2019 - 17:50

Не улетай ввысь

AlmitraAlmitra    Sexta-feira, 15/11/2019 - 22:02

> Wrests a scream from the flesh.
> Over the rage of delirium.

I like those a lot! Definitely adding them to my internal poetic vocab.

Pinchus ZelenogorskyPinchus Zelenogorsky    Sexta-feira, 15/11/2019 - 23:31

>Tenderly console despair.
Скорее наоборот. Жаль меня тоской, являясь по ночам.

BlackSea4everBlackSea4ever    Sábado, 16/11/2019 - 00:10

Yes, we talked about it with Al - I understood "жаль" as console ILO sting. But, I now doubt myself.

Pinchus ZelenogorskyPinchus Zelenogorsky    Domingo, 17/11/2019 - 18:15

Да, спасибо, я уже увидел. Жаль тут глагол. Иначе было бы что-то типа "Нежной тоски жаль"

BlackSea4everBlackSea4ever    Sábado, 16/11/2019 - 00:52

i am waffling. Back to console. Awaiting humbling.

Sophia_Sophia_    Domingo, 17/11/2019 - 17:12

Tiny correction of the original lyrics.
penultimate line: не улетай---> не убегай