This translation can also be found here: https://vk.com/topic-124885522_36498625
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If it is your work, I'm impressed. My Russian is pretty rusty, though (worse than my Old Norse). I suppose the text mostly consists of proper names? But you seem to have translated them by their literal meaning? May I ask what kinds of dictionaries etc. you based this on?
Имена Одина (Всеотца) взяты из Старшей Эдды (пер. А.И.Корсун) и Младшей Эдды (пер. О. А. Смирницкая).