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Твои слезы

слезы мои у тебя на руках,
прижми к себе крепче, как в моих снах.
Слезы в глазах все ярче сияют
с тобой я живу, без тебя умираю
Postat de rottenporcelainrottenporcelain la Sâmbătă, 16/03/2019 - 00:11
Ultima oară editat de rottenporcelainrottenporcelain în data Duminică, 17/03/2019 - 18:21
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fixed the text.
found it in here: https://vk.com/topic-74895234_33560000

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IgeethecatIgeethecat    Duminică, 17/03/2019 - 17:26

This is not right, she sings something else, but I can barely understand what. She starts with слезы мои and ends with с тобой я живу, без тебя умираю (or something like this, not sure). What you have posted does not make any sense in Russian and full of grammatical errors. You should delete this transcription and your English translation and post a request to transcribe the song instead of making your own wild guesses

rottenporcelainrottenporcelain    Duminică, 17/03/2019 - 17:36

i can barely understand either, and i tried my best. sorry my Russian isn't as good, but i still tried. especially when the audio is very distant, and echoey. that's why i asked for help on this. but thanks for your input i guess. i'll try and fix it. sorry if i may have upset you or anything.

IgeethecatIgeethecat    Duminică, 17/03/2019 - 18:17

You haven’t upset me, this kind of poetry upsets me though Regular smile
I think, it is слёзы на .. губах, not слёзы на ... руках, makes more sense

rottenporcelainrottenporcelain    Duminică, 17/03/2019 - 18:23

i added where i found the rest. luckily, someone asked ! and i think it was the vocalist who replied with "слезы мои у тебя на руках, прижми к себе крепче, как в моих снах." so that is what i put Regular smile .

BlackSea4everBlackSea4ever    Duminică, 17/03/2019 - 18:27

It's extremely depressing and sends a horrid message!
Keep working thru your translations, but pick songs that will not turn you inside out.
It's isn't just this kind of song that can bring you down - I once played a great song on repeat, and ended up in shambles because it profoundly affects your emotions, especially when vulnerable! https://lyricstranslate.com/en/Vladimir-Vysotsky-Koni-KONI-lyrics.html