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Predictability

Another morning
Wedgwood blue sky
Pale gold sunlight
Trees haven't lost the leaves
Everyone still sleeps
Life quietly slips by
Day after day
After each sleepless night
Feelings riot inside
Tears threaten
Can't let them out
I am too wise
Words are mundane
So I'll smile and hide
 
Postat de BlackSea4everBlackSea4ever la Sâmbătă, 21/09/2019 - 12:11
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Versiuni: #1#2
Очередное утро;
Оттенок "Веджвуд" в небе;
Свет солнца бледно-золотой;
В листве ещё деревья.
Все люди ещё спят,
Жизнь тихо утекает
День за днём...
После бессонной ночи
В душе бушуют чувства,
Грозят сорваться слёзы:
Дать волю им нельзя.
Я слишком мудрая,
Слова же столь банальны:
Я слёзы за улыбку спрячу...
 
Mulțumesc!
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This is a poetic translation - deviations from the meaning of the original are present (extra words, extra or omitted information, substituted concepts).

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Postat de vevvevvevvev la Duminică, 24/01/2021 - 12:53
Traduceri ale cântecului "Predictability"
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Comentarii
BlackSea4everBlackSea4ever    Duminică, 24/01/2021 - 13:21

And Sky is blue again today...
Thanks for the translation after the last fiasco.

vevvevvevvev    Luni, 25/01/2021 - 00:52

Ни о каком фиаско и речи быть не может. Призыв услышан.

IrulaIrula    Duminică, 24/01/2021 - 14:07

Никакого фиаско совершенно не было!

PinchusPinchus    Luni, 25/01/2021 - 01:34

> I am too wise
Words are mundane

Мне кажется, тут скорее "я слишком благоразумна" (не даю волю эмоциям), "а слова слишком банальны, обычны" (то есть не выражают суть). То есть нет выхода: ни покричать, ни выговориться. Остается прятаться и улыбаться. Диана, прав ли я?

BlackSea4everBlackSea4ever    Luni, 25/01/2021 - 01:59

Yes, PZ, you are absolutely correct. But we had this discussion many times, sometimes, translator makes choices that reflect his own position, and I am totally fine with this for my “poems”
If for Z, words were “material” - so be it. If he wants to follow your advice and change it, I’d welcome it.

BlackSea4everBlackSea4ever    Luni, 25/01/2021 - 04:00

She can’t flirt with me - just you. You know she’s implying x-shades of something. Lol.

IgeethecatIgeethecat    Luni, 25/01/2021 - 06:20

I can flirt with whoever I want. D, didn't you clame it recently? X-shades, oh please, I don't go to that part of the town

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