The Mountain sat upon the Plain (traducere în Ebraică)

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The Mountain sat upon the Plain

The Mountain sat upon the Plain
In his tremendous Chair—
His observation omnifold,
His inquest, everywhere—
The Seasons played around his knees
Like Children round a sire—
Grandfather of the Days is He
Of Dawn, the Ancestor—
Postat de GeborgenheitGeborgenheit la Joi, 08/07/2021 - 06:02
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ההר ישב במישור

ההר ישב במישור
בתוך הכורסא הענקית שלו—
שדה הראיה שלו בלתי מוגבל,
הביקורת שלו, בכל—
ליד ברכיו שחקו עונות השנה
כמו ילדים סביב ראש השבט—
סב הימים הוא
האב הקדמון של הזריחה—
This is a poetic translation - deviations from the meaning of the original are present (extra words, extra or omitted information, substituted concepts).
Postat de IsraelWuIsraelWu la Joi, 16/09/2021 - 16:20
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