Hej :D Everything looks good, just these few words that have been misunderstood, feel free to comment if you see something wrong in my comment^_^

(Coming at you girl, you know you like this girl)
When he says "coming at you girl" he's saying "I'M coming at you girl" they made the sentence shorter :)
"you know you like this girl" when they say "like" they're not saying "kao" but "sviđati se"
so maybe "znam da ti se sviđa ova devojka"? :)

Is just kicking it with you girl: he doesn't literally mean "kicking" he means "to hang out with her" or "being with her"

Its a black out girl the lights are off: a black out is when the lights turn off because something is wrong with the electricity. For an example if you're at work in the building at all of the sudden the lights turn off because the electricity is not in order, we call that a "black out" :)

I can feel you getting close now take your clothes off:
"now take your clothes off" it's a command, so instead of "skidaš" it would be "skidaj"

Hope that helps :D
Pozdrav