>я узнаю давно знакомые черты
Kevin, 'давно' is an attribute for the noun here, not for the verb (long forgotten linemeants).
Altogether it's rather not of a present term state, but of the current moment, therefor I'd suggest revising pr.perfect too.
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Я жду тебя
Я снова здесь, сама не знаю почему,
Какая сила вновь влечёт меня сюда,
Но на это место прихожу теперь одна,
Всё поглотила тьма, закрыла всё она.
Я жду тебя, я жду тебя, наверно, зря.
Я жду тебя, я жду тебя - уже рассвет.
Я жду тебя, и облака огнём горят,
Рисуют мне, рисуют мне твой силуэт.
Я узнаю давно знакомые черты,
И нарисованный ты движешься ко мне.
Может, мне приснилось, что я в сказочной стране,
И ты явился мне в рассветной тишине.
Я жду тебя, я жду тебя, наверно, зря.
Я жду тебя, я жду тебя - уже рассвет.
Я жду тебя, и облака огнём горят,
Рисуют мне, рисуют мне твой силуэт.
Postat de algebra la 2011-03-15
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I Am Waiting for You
I'm here again and don't even know why,
What power is pulling me here anew,
But I arrive at this place now alone,
Darkness has swallowed everything, it has enclosed everything.
I'm waiting for you, waiting for you, probably in vain,
I'm waiting for you, waiting for you, it's already dawn
I am waiting for you, and the clouds shine blazingly,
They limn for me, they limn for me, your silhouette.
I recognize your all-too-familiar lineaments,
And, depicted there, you are moving towards me.
Maybe I've been dreaming that I'm in fairy-tale land
And you've appeared to me in auroral quietude.
I'm waiting for you, waiting for you, probably in vain,
I'm waiting for you, waiting for you, it's already dawn
I am waiting for you, and the clouds shine blazingly,
They limn for me, they limn for me, your silhouette.
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Maybe "I recognize your all-too-familiar lineaments"?
That will do, sorry I forgot the lyrics and mixed it up a little bit 😅
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