Гость в 2019-08-21
Treugol'ny
ср, 21/08/2019 - 02:03
"Only we're stay in this cafe
In silent like an everyday"
OpalMoon translation made these lines to sound so good, but the English version makes very little sense.I declare to correct if I'm mistaken.
Kind Regards
Anatoli
.@sandring Many thanks to Nadia for having the enormous patience to correct my poem :) if the translators want, they can correct their translations, I'm very grateful for those translations. Thank to all of you :
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Also many thanks to .@shumbrat for the correction (sorry some of my emails are deleted :( by mistake)