Для тебя
Just for you
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© Iremia 🌿
1. | Russian waltz...and tango |
1. | Русское поле (Russkoye Pole) |
2. | Для тебя (Dlya tebya) |
3. | Над окошком месяц (Nad okoshkom mesjats) |
These strong metaphors sound a bit like Oriental poetry.
best ever man -> "the best man ever" or something?
manage ... bring -> to bring
Brighter than the rainbows -> why not "brighter than summer rainbows" like in the original? It's a nice image.
Мир прекраснее сделаю я... -> "I will make the world lovelier and give you sunset and sunrise" or something?
ask...sing -> ask to sing
it’s song -> its
last till forever and more -> " last till forever" or " last forever and more", but both seems a bit too much :)
Waite for -> typo
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>From heart taking clues
Это что-то типа "сообщая сердечные секреты"? Вроде это не совсем "всем сердцем любя"
Ира, выровняйте пожалуйста строки уж как-нибудь. Отныне и впредь. Правда - невозможно читать. Найдите какой-нибудь "сердечный ключик".
Просто скопировал. Видите?
Just for you, just for you, just for you
I would like to be best ever man
I am ready to cross every land on this earth
And all seas I would gladly traverse
Please do trust, please do trust, please trust me -
I will manage,
From heart taking clues,
Bring the stars from the sky
To become only one
Just for you, just for you, just for you!
Joy will light up
Brighter than the rainbows,
And the winters
Will becomes less vicious
Many lovers
walked this earth before us
But they never
Loved like I love you!
Just for you, just for you, just for you
World will look lovelier
Than before
I will give you sunrise
And see dawn in your eyes
I will ask a nightingale sing its song
Please do trust, please do trust, please trust me -
I will manage,
From heart taking clues,
Bring the stars from the sky
To become only one
Just for you, just for you, just for you!
I will keep saying your lovely name
Over’n over
Over’n over
I will listen to your tender words,
My dear, endlessly
Love should last till forever and more
For a lover, for a lover
Otherwise why should we, otherwise why should we
Wait for one true love.
Just for you, just for you, just for you
I would like to be best ever man
I am ready to cross every land on this earth
And all seas I would gladly traverse
Please do trust, please do trust, please trust me -
I will manage,
From heart taking clues,
Bring the stars from the sky
To become only one
Just for you, just for you, just for you
This is how it looks on my screen.
In general, I have tons of IT issues with LT. I tried so many different things to fix it, none helped so far. I was also told that I should maybe start another account with a different username and see if it’s me as a user or the system. So I am sorry for the inconvenience.
It’s takes at least a couple of minutes to send any comments or to open one. 😟
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