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Fiesta
Et les verres étaient vides
Et la bouteille brisée
Et le lit était grand ouvert
Et la porte fermée
Et toutes les étoiles de verre
Du bonheur et de la beauté
Resplendissaient dans la poussière
De la chambre mal balayée
Et j’étais ivre mort
Et j’étais feu de joie
Et toi ivre vivante
Toute nue dans mes bras
В последний раз исправлено 
MissAtomicLau в 2024-02-25
MissAtomicLau в 2024-02-25Перевод
Fiesta
So the glasses were empty
and the bottle broken
And the bed was wide open
and the door closed
And all of the glass stars
of happiness and beauty
were sparkling in the dust
of the poorly dusted room.
And I was dead drunk
And I was a bonfire
And you were alive, drunk,
all naked in my arms.
Гость в 2016-10-19Jacques Prévert: Топ 3
| 1. | Déjeuner du matin |
| 2. | Barbara |
| 3. | Je suis comme je suis |
Комментарии
Gavin
ср, 19/10/2016 - 16:07
I think it's the "living" that bothers me as it sounds a little like she had made her home there - (living as the present continuous rather than an adjective) - hence my preference for "alive". I think it's ok with or without the "and" - it probably sounds equally strange in both languages.
We need more guys like him, really.