【1】瘟起 (Wēnqǐ) (превод на енглески)

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【1】瘟起

自古
封恶疾
镇印五毒
千年万余载
然破于野心者
千古之封印
竟留罅隙
五瘟起
散疫
 
Поставио/ла: Isaiah ChenIsaiah Chen У: Недеља, 17/05/2020 - 13:26
Last edited by ltlt on Петак, 22/05/2020 - 19:29
превод на енглескиенглески
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The Rise of Pestilence

I
Since antiquity
Seal bad disease
Suppress the toxic creatures
For thousand and million years
But because of overly ambitious people
The seal from ancient times
Unexpectedly has a leak
Diseases come out
Escaped pestilence
Attacks
 
Хвала!
thanked 5 times
Unless noted in 'Author's comment' section, all the translations are done from the original lyrics.
You are welcome to offer any suggestion to my translation!
Поставио/ла: Туна ЧеневскаяТуна Ченевская У: Понедељак, 18/05/2020 - 09:51
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Wordcount of each line:
1 2 3 4 5 6 5 4 3 2 1

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Vera JahnkeVera Jahnke    Понедељак, 18/05/2020 - 12:35

Cool that you kept the strucure! 👍

Туна ЧеневскаяТуна Ченевская    Понедељак, 18/05/2020 - 14:57

Thank you😊 I try to convey the origin though it is difficult because it is in ancient Chinese style. Wink smile

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