Fisches Nachtgesang (превод на енглески)

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Fisches Nachtgesang

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Поставио/ла: Vera JahnkeVera Jahnke У: Субота, 16/02/2019 - 17:33
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das vielleicht "tiefste deutsche Gedicht"

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Fish lullaby

Верзије: #1#2#3
 sun
 
 has gone
 
  fisherman's drinking rum
 
   now he sings a ditty
 
  to the girl
 
   who is so pretty
 
  come with me
 
   the night is young
 
  let fish dream
 
   while we have fun
 
  until dawn - then
 
 I'm gone
 
Hon
 
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Поставио/ла: BlackSea4everBlackSea4ever У: Субота, 24/08/2019 - 21:42
Last edited by BlackSea4everBlackSea4ever on Четвртак, 29/08/2019 - 21:48
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Probably as bad at this as others - not sure I got what's required.
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Vera JahnkeVera Jahnke    Субота, 24/08/2019 - 22:11

"Probably as bad at this as others" - Don't say "bad", Deanna, you can write whatever you want, you are free like a fish in the ocean!
I like you second version best, although the fischerman leaves the pretty girl. Hm, doesn't matter, she can read your poems and have some absinthe. That will make her day! Thank you very much! 🐠

Radu RobertRadu Robert    Недеља, 25/08/2019 - 13:39

Fisherman ' s not up to any good it seems :))) Nicely done Deanna love the contrast "till sun's up " till dawn