Missing lines in Japanese

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<a href="/sr/translator/citl%C4%81licue" class="userpopupinfo" rel="user1109697">citlālicue <div class="moderator_icon" title="Уредник" ></div></a>
Датум придружења: 31.03.2012
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The song does contain some lines in Hebrew, but it's the Japanese lines I need:

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黄昏の山々 色映えて
松の香漂い 鐘の音響く
夢を見ているような エルサレムよ
城壁見上げて 一人たたずむ

ירושלים של זהב
...夕日に輝き 
私は主を褒める 竪琴で
黄金の都 夕日に輝き 
私は主を褒める 竪琴で

ירושלים של זהב
...夕日に輝き 
私は主を褒める 竪琴で
黄金の都 夕日に輝き 
私は主を褒める 竪琴で

***** (can't hear these two verses) between 2:20-3:07 in the video

ירושלים של זהב
...夕日に輝き 
私は主を褒める 竪琴で
黄金の都 夕日に輝き 
私は主を褒める 竪琴で

ירושלים של זהב
...夕日に輝き 
私は主を褒める 竪琴で
黄金の都 夕日に輝き 
私は主を褒める 竪琴で

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<a href="/sr/translator/heydoc" class="userpopupinfo" rel="user1289005">hey_doc </a>
Датум придружења: 23.04.2016

黄昏の山々 色映えて
The mountains glow under twilight
松の香漂い 鐘の音響く
The scent of pine in the air, the bells ring
夢を見ているような エルサレムよ
O dreamlike Jerusalem
城壁見上げて 一人たたずむ
I stand alone, looking up at the castle walls

ירושלים של זהב
...夕日に輝き 
...Under the light of sunset
私は主を褒める 竪琴で
I praise the Lord, with my harp
黄金の都 夕日に輝き 
The capital lit by the golden sunset
私は主を褒める 竪琴で
I praise the Lord, with my harp

This is the general meaning of the lyrics. Feel free to reword it however you like.

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<a href="/sr/translator/citl%C4%81licue" class="userpopupinfo" rel="user1109697">citlālicue <div class="moderator_icon" title="Уредник" ></div></a>
Датум придружења: 31.03.2012

Thank you for the translation but I wanted to confirm if the transcription of the song was complete (if any lines were missing).

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<a href="/sr/translator/heydoc" class="userpopupinfo" rel="user1289005">hey_doc </a>
Датум придружења: 23.04.2016

Oh, sorry. I thought you wanted both translation and transcription but I couldn't listen then.
I listened to it now, and there are extra lines, though I don't hear them well enough to transcribe. Sorry, that's all I can do.

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<a href="/sr/translator/jelly-cat" class="userpopupinfo" rel="user1235999">Jelly Cat </a>
Датум придружења: 16.02.2015

I was trying to catch some lines but all I was able to hear is "老いるようにoiru youni(the way they grow aged)", "遠く谷間に流れtooku tanima ni nagare(flowing far away between the valleys)", "西の広場でnishi no hiroba de(at the western plaza)" and that's it.

I'm afraid I can't somehow help you out.