ioan.transylvania
Tor, 20/01/2022 - 16:44
If you love poetry ...
Mystery | Misterio ...
by Octavio Paz
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Misterio
Relumbra el aire, relumbra,
el mediodía relumbra,
pero no veo al sol.
Y de presencia en presencia
todo se me transparenta,
pero no veo al sol.
Perdido en las transparencias
voy de reflejo a fulgor,
pero no veo al sol.
Y él en la luz se desnuda
y a cada esplendor pregunta,
pero no ve al sol.
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vevvev 2021-10-11
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Mystery
The air shines, it shines,
the noontide shines too,
but I don't see the sun.
And from one presence to the next
everything is transparent to me,
but I don't see the sun.
Lost in these transparencies
I go from reflection to brightness,
but I don't see the sun.
And he undresses in the light
and to each splendor he asks,
but he does not see the sun.
Octavio Paz: Topp 3
| 1. | Viento, agua, piedra |
| 2. | La rama |
| 3. | Tus ojos |
Kommentarer
ioan.transylvania
Tor, 20/01/2022 - 16:44
Geborgenheit
ioan.transylvania
Lör, 22/01/2022 - 16:50
Thanks Geborgenheit for the stars and the nice comments. You were right with that past incident. It was my big mistake. I clicked on the "Save and publish" button instead of "Save draft". I was lucky you noticed the mistake and I made the improvements ... But that's life, we make mistakes and try to improve ourselves every single day.
cheers,
ioan
MissAtomicLau
Tis, 25/01/2022 - 02:33
This is such a good translation, Ioan.
Keep up the good work!
ioan.transylvania
Tis, 25/01/2022 - 15:35
Thank you so much, Anto!!!
Your comments and your
stars are so heavy and bright...
Cheers,
Ioan
Russia is waging a disgraceful war on Ukraine. Stå med Ukraina!
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