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    Room without a View

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Once by sundown this is my town
I'll be seeing you
Just to walk along the water to
A room without a view
 
Just the splashes of me match you
Rhythms all in time
For pleasure or by habit
Was it by design?
 
What is in the isolation
Someone always watching you
What's a night that has no future
A clandestine rendezvous
 
Leave me here among the clutter
In the smallest room
A naked bulb, a naked body
In a room without a view
 
In there for pleasure or by habit
In a room without a view
 

 

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uniquenessuniqueness    Pzr, 14/08/2022 - 20:52

"As we walk along the water to // A room without a view" can be replaced with " Just as we walk along the water..."
"Water splashes only matching" can be replaced with " Just as we pleasing, only imagine "
"For pleasure or by habit // Was it by design" can be replaced with " Was it by desire? "

Kevin RainbowKevin Rainbow
   Pzr, 14/08/2022 - 22:46

Thanks for your suggestions.
"Just as we pleasing, only imagine" and "desire" (instead of "design") unfortunately don't seem correct.

uniquenessuniqueness    Pzt, 15/08/2022 - 07:32

I don't find them appropriate, but that sounds like this Kevin. You're welcome

Kevin RainbowKevin Rainbow
   Pzt, 15/08/2022 - 09:11

I changed the fifth and sixth line to -

"Just the splashes of me match you
Rhythms all in time"

It sounds more accurate now.