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Ty govorila o nesbytochnom
Ты говорила о несбыточном
Так мерно. Так неторопливо.
Ложились руки камнем пыточным
Желанным сном нетерпеливо.
Стелила огненные волосы
Мне на лицо, на шею. С ними
Я улетал в потоке голоса
От мира их шатром хранимый.
Sophia_ tarafından 2019-08-17 tarihinde eklendi.Çeviri
You spoke about what's not to be
You spoke about what's not to be
So temperate and so unhurried
Like torture stone my hands were laid, like
Welcome sleep, whose wait was undesired.
Your spread your fiery locks across
My face and neck, and with that
I flew away, in streaming voice, out
Of this world, and by their dome protected.
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| 3 teşekkür aldı | ||
Mity tarafından 2019-08-18 tarihinde eklendi.Sophia_ adlı kullanıcının isteğine karşılık olarak eklendiBoris Pinsker: En İyi 3
| 1. | Васильевский остров (Vasilyevskiy ostrov) |
| 2. | Так тебя мало (Tak tebya malo) |
| 3. | Так больно... (Tak bolʹno...) |
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N. M. Sh.
Pzt, 19/08/2019 - 10:45
Your hair, like fire, you spread across
=
Your fiery hair you spread across = You spread your fiery hair across
("like fire, you spread across" = звучит тревожно, угрожающе, чего нет в оригинале)
in streaming voice
=
[in a stream]/[with the flow] of voice
("streaming" у меня как-то больше связано с Интернет-сервисами)
Согласование числа в след. двух примерах, принимая, что "волосы" = "ними" = "их":
and with that
= (возможно)
and with those
(если hair считать как мн. число)
and by their dome
= (возможно)
and by its dome
(если hair считать как ед. число)
Russia is waging a disgraceful war on Ukraine. Ukrayna'nın Yanında Olun!
Çeviren Hakkında
The rhyme was very tough to find.
Without distorting meaning.
But I shall say, I've managed this,
To my great satisfaction))))).