Terjemahan Bahasa Inggris

No offense, but you shouldn't give heed to anyone who hasn't made any major contributions (translations, detailed explanations and corrections, etc. etc.) to the site. :)

Thought I'd offer some assistance of my own:

Block 2; line 1
I know it's necessary in German, but you really don't need a comma in between this line. Believe me, you -- I tend to do the same thing. :bigsmile:

Block 3; line 1
Though it's present in the source, may I suggest using the past variant instead? And also throw in a comma after 'other' --> "Since we KNEW each other, my life is colo(u)rful and pleasant,"

Block 3; line 3
You need a comma after 'happen'

Block 4; line 2
an other --> another

Block 6; line 2
loose --> lose

Apart from a few grammatical errors, I think this translation is great!