添 (Ten) - Angol fordítás

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添 (Ten)

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添

俯いて泣いた貴方の

濡れた頬にそっと手を触れた

「大丈夫、わたしがいるよ。

貴方は一人じゃないよ。」

たった一人で抱え込む

苦しみも生きにくさも

私は知っているから

ほら、声を出して

一人きりでいいなんて

そんなこと言わないで

貴方のすべてを受け入れるから

顔を上げて

Adjoin

I felt your sullen cheeks,

So covered in tears,

"It's alright, I'm here."

You're not alone."

I know the suffering

you bear all alone,

How hard life is,

So come, give me your voice

Don't ever try to tell me

You'll be fine alone,

I accept all of you,

So raise your head

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RosyTheRascal

beküldve: 11 ápr 2021 - 23:15

Added in reply to request by

nyaasar

Szerző észrevételei:

To answer your question nyaasar, "ten" (てん) is one reading of the character yes. But used in isolation (which it typically isn't) this character isn't a word so much as a concept, and its use as a title here is (I think) stylistic

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nyaasar

12 ápr 2021, 03:57

Yes! Thank you!
Now I can finally finish my translation.
I'd been stuck at "たった一人で抱え込む" part and was confused about who is holding what/who.
I thought it was the 2nd person who was holding their own hardship, told by the 1st person.

Anyway, thank you for taking the time to write this translation.

RosyTheRascal A

13 ápr 2021, 00:39

Hi again Nyaasar,
I think that's also a possible translation and you could be right, it can be difficult sometimes to determine what's the end of a sentence and what's a qualifying clause for the next sentence when it comes to song lyrics because of their format. Of course, if we were looking at a normally formatted sentence or listening to a sentence with a natural rhythm (instead of a musical one), this ambiguity wouldn't exist.

But I confess I only listened to the song once before writing up the translation so I wasn't listening to that particular line while writing, listening to it again you could be right so I'll edit it really quick