英語 の翻訳

Well, I found a few things I would change. Your English is becoming better and more assured all the time. Now let's get down to the few changes I would recommend:
1. The first line. Don't you think that the meaning is something like "I am looking after your tranquility"?
2. Second line. From afar would perhaps be a little more idiomatic, but I don't think "from far" is wrong.
Chorus, second line. I would leave out the comma.
In the line "look for me that I will always be" I would recommend two changes. First I think I would translate que here as "because" or "for" rather than "that" At the end of the line I would add "here" just for clarity. The reason is that in English "be" would suugest "ser" rather than "estar." But adding "here" makes everything clear.
The line "Don't let anyone know how the place it is" isn't proper English but I don't see the Spanish version in the transcription pane so I don't know how to advise you to change it.
In the line "Look for me there's no time to waste it" I would recommend two small changes. I would put a comma after "for me". I would leave out "it" at the end.
In the line "My life ties up, tangles and get expanded" the grammar isn't quite right because in the context "ties" is a reflexive verb so it needs an object. So I would put "My life ties itself up...."
In the line "And it is not cause of you" I think "cause" is too informal. I would recommend "because."
That's all.
Again, good job.

No, I don't mean that. I see it's really the next verse after the chorus. I mean, "tangles and gets expanded"
Now for that troublesome line. OK, now I understand. I think all you have to do is take out "it" and then you'll have a grammatically correct line.
However, now I'm wondering about the meaning of the Spanish line. Could it be something like "don't let anyone know what the situation is"? "how the place is" doesn't seem to make much sense.