Igeethecat
Sat, 18/07/2020 - 18:37
Nice, but гореть - is not to burn, it's more like to be lighten in this context imho
Гори, гори ясно, пока не погасло
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Russian
Original lyrics
Купалец
Гой, ты, Ярий! Яр-Огне до неба воздымает
Младому Купале славу браты воспевают
Закатилось Ярило
Давши любоваться
Взором во чисто поле
Красою Купальца
Как склонили длани, землю чествуя поклоном
Ярому Купальцу молвим да заветно слово:
«Ой, гори, гори ясно
Гласом заклинаю
От земли до неба яро коло воздымая»
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Daniel Rafael Pérez Contreras on 2020-03-23
Daniel Rafael Pérez Contreras on 2020-03-23Contributors: 
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Translation
Kupalets
Goy, to you fiery! Fiery fire rises to the sky
The brothers celebrate the glory by the young Kupala
Yarilo turns
Give to him and admire
with a glance the clean field
For the beauty of the Kupalets.
How they tilted their hands, honoring the land with a reverence
And they say to the fiery Kupalets a secret word:
«Oh, lighten, lighten brightly
I conjure you with my voice
Raising fiery circle from the earth to the sky»
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Comments
Igeethecat
Sat, 18/07/2020 - 18:37
Daniel Rafael Pérez Contreras
Sat, 18/07/2020 - 18:39
Yes Masha sorry, it is for my bad english, I thought a word for "arder" in spanish
Igeethecat
Sat, 18/07/2020 - 18:45
Dan, you don't have to apologize, my English is worse than yours, so, we are here just to help each other, ¡amigo!
Russia is waging a disgraceful war on Ukraine. Stand With Ukraine!
About translator
A Kupalets (Купалец) is a large bonfire made from dry trunks of full-size trees forming a kind of dense hut that lights up on Ivan Kupala's Night Festival where people jump on it.
Yarilo is the Slavic God of vegetation, war, fertility and spring.
Goy (esy) is an ancient Russian root (language) with the meaning of life, an excellent word in the sense of "being alive!" or "be healthy"