how many nights have I deceived myself > how many nights I have deceived myself

trains have passed by

how many letters did I write to you > how many letters I've written you

what a sin I have committed > what sin I've commited
because of all I forget > because I've forgotten them all

Look I've tired of waiting for you > Look, I'm tired of waiting
to admire for another part > I'm looking somewhere else1
if you come to look for me > should you come looking for me

you get to the deepest part of me2

I collapse in your eyes > I fall apart before your eyes (in front of you)

I'm surrender > I'll surrender

that break > that getaway

Laugh at dawn > when we laughed in the early morning / laughter in the early morning

and the love that you used to swear was eternal > and the love you swore to me was eternal

MY ETERNAL LOVE > my eternal love (no caps)

forgive if I can not find the words
Describing nostalgia and torture > ...I'm sorry if I can't find the words to describe the nostalgia and torture (or agony)

Of those winter nights > those winter nights (no 'of)

I do not know who put you in my way > I don't know who put you on my path/life

• 1. he's looking at something else or someone else instead of her
• 2. deepest...what? deep inside, deep part of me, etc.