Erich Fried

Ein Versuch - traduzione in Inglese

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Ein Versuch

Ich hab versucht
zu versuchen,
während ich arbeiten muss,
an meine Arbeit zu denken
und nicht an dich.
Und ich bin glücklich,
dass der Versuch
nicht geglückt ist.

An experiment

I have tried
To try
While I have to work,
To think about my work
And not about you
And I am happy
That the attempt
Wasn't successful
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brightswanbrightswan
inviato il 11 Feb 2012 - 22:05

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I hope I've captured the meaning!!

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marinos25 marinos25 M
11 Feb 2012, 22:56

Hi, brightswan,

thanks a lot for translation :)

The meaning is about 95% ok:
1. "während" = while (not 'because')
2. The first and the last line, if you make them one sentence, you'll see that they're both in the past (Ich hab's versucht, doch der Versuch ist nicht gelungen). So, you should better say "that the attempt wasn't sucessful". (And maybe you better put BIG letters only at the beginning of new sentences ;))

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