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Fire Spell
Grow like my might,
open up like my heart
Grow like my might,
open up like my heart
Rise, rise higher
Shine, shine to more distant places
Rise, rise higher
Shine, shine to more distant places
Burst up to heavens
Radiate to the edge of the world
Burst up to heavens
Radiate to the edge of the world
Turn my pain-bodies into dust
Light up my shadowy sides
Turn my pain-bodies into dust
Light up my shadowy sides
Clean up what has been
Free what has not been yet3
Clean up what has been
Free what has not been yet
Make me new-new-new
Give me the strength inside you4
Make me new-new-new
Give me the strength inside you
Fire animal into the darkness
Gold glow into the blackness
Fire animal into the darkness
Gold glow into the blackness
Light into every mind/sense5
Warmth into every soul
Light into every mind/sense
Warmth into every soul
And that is how it is
- 1. all vocatives are in diminutive (-ke ending) because that is the respectful animistic way to address higher powers; it uses the so-called Kalevala meter of folk poetry but stress-based
- 2. 'eyes' are also diminutive
- 3. she pronounces "pole" as "pol(l)", probably being afraid to break the 8-syllable trochaic beat/hypnotism, although in this position it is very common to have a triplet of shorts in folk poetry
- 4. I find it a bit unexpected that she asks not for 'some strength/power' but all of it; some strength would be "jõu-du" (long-short) but that would not work meter-wise
- 5. "meeleke(sse)" and "hingeke(sse)" are also diminutives
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