Aldefina
Vimto12
Tue, 26/03/2013 - 13:46
good translation :) some suggestions:
verse 1, line 3: that you make me feel
line 4: no 'that' and also perhaps it would be better to be consistent with the translation of 'conservar'
line 6: (that) I can still live
line 8: dying because of/of you
verse 2, line 5: I've looked in my soul
line 6: wanting to find you
verse 3, line 5: you still remember
verse 4, line 3: you talked to me of/about love
line 4: I was still able to smile
line 6: and now you're leaving me
verse 5, line 2: 'that it talks to me of/about you' or 'to talk to me about/of you'
line 4: wanting to hear you
yoledo589ad 
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