My Sun

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Spanish

Mi Sol

Eres el regalo que nunca pedí,
La porción del cielo que no merecí,
Todos mis anhelos se han cumplido en ti,
Y no quiero perderte; no lo quiero así.

Te dejé y tan sola me sentí sin ti,
Y no quiero de nuevo estar así, así.

Tómame en tus brazos, soy parte de ti,
Soy parte de ti.

Eres mi sol, luz, calor, y vida para mí.
Eres tú, mi sol, la estrella que a mi vida sustentó.
Eres tú, mi sol.

Lo que quiero ahora es perderme en ti,
Y ser envuelta en todo lo que eres tú.

Te dejé y tan sola me sentí sin ti,
Y no quiero de nuevo estar así, así.

Tómame en tus brazos, soy parte de ti,
Soy parte de ti.

Eres mi sol, luz, calor, y vida para mí.
Eres tú, mi sol, la estrella que a mi vida sustentó.
Eres tú, mi sol, luz, calor, y vida para mí.
Eres tú, mi sol, la estrella que a mi vida sustentó.

Eres tú mi sol.
Eres el regalo que nunca pedí,
La porción del cielo que no merecí...

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English

My Sun

You are the gift for which I never asked,
The piece of the sky which I did not deserve,
All of my wishes have come true in you,
And I do not want to lose you, not like this.

I left you, and I felt so alone without you,
I cannot be alone like that again.

Take me in your arms, I am part of you,
I am part of you.

You are my sun, light, warmth, and life for me.
You are my sun, the star which maintained my life.
You are my sun.

What I wish for now is to lose myself in you,
And be wrapped up in everything that you are.

I left you, and I felt so alone without you,
I cannot be alone like that again.

Take me in your arms, I am part of you,
I am part of you.

You are my sun, light, warmth, and life for me.
You are my sun, the star which maintained my life.
You are my sun, light, warmth, and life for me.
You are my sun, the star which maintained my life.

You are my sun.
You are the gift for which I never asked,
The piece of the sky which I did not deserve...

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