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Проблем мање (Problem manje)

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Проблем мање

A problem less

Without you just one less problem

One less problem, one less problem

Without you just one less problem

You are used to the night, I am used to the darkness

If you want to come, say it, but then you have to be strong

And you are bad, bad, what are you doing to me

I fell to the bottom, it costed me

And you are bad, bad, you are doing this again

When you say, you break, you climb on the table

She pours, spills, takes and does not ask

She knows that the entire city knows her (bad, bad)

Behind, a Jeep is following us, she says step on it

Tonight the whole city is ours (bad, bad)

Good guys at school, bad guys with money

You know what gets you going, white roses and guns

You're again in town, I know you're in every bottle

The Devil wears Prada, has your name and your eyes

Without you just one less problem

One less problem, one less problem

Without you just one less problem

When you get drung alone and alcohol breaks you down, you don't act normal

Every other day, you come by to sleep, in front of my apartment, uninvited

I want it here and now, now, maybe she also wants to come, come

She doesn't even not know what she wants, as if she had no other problem

She pours, purges takes and does not ask

He knows that the entire city knows her (bad, bad)

Behind the Jeep she follows us, she says more gas

Tonight the whole city is ours (bad, bad)

Good at school, bad guys with money

You know what sets you up, white roses and guns

You're again in town, I know you're in every bottle

The Devil wears Prada, has your name and your eyes

Without you just one less problem

One less problem, one less problem

Without you just one less problem

Belgrade, darkness is falling, beng-beng sounds again

And at night, the street is hotter than the favela

Darkness is falling over the city, I hear the sirens again

And at night, the street is hotter than the favela

Without you just one less problem

One less problem, one less problem

Without you just one less problem

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добавено на 14 януари 2019 - 18:22

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Balkantürk

13 август 2021, 20:09

Prevod nije loš, ali neke stvari su previše bukvalno prevedene i previše je varijacija u prevodu

Bez tebe samo, problem manje -- Zarez u originalu je na pogrešnom mestu, treba da bude ispred “samo” a ne iza, što utiče i na
prevod (Without you just one less problem)
Ti si navikla na noći, ja sam navik'o na mrak --- “Used to” je već upotrebljeno za istu reč u istom stihu pa nema potrebe da se koristi sinonim
Kad kažeš, lomiš, penješ se na sto - Nisam sigurna šta je pisac hteo da kaže, ali čini mi se da “speak” ima više smisla
Ona sipa prosipa, uzima i ne pita - Sigurna sam da se ovo odnosi na neko piće pa “spills” ima više smisla
Zna da zna je ceo grad (zlo, zlo) -- Ako je u pitanju devojka, “he” (on) nema smisla
Iza đip prati nas, ona kaže dodaj gas --- A Jeep is following us... ona kaže dodaj gas --- “More gas” je previše bukvalno prevedeno. “Step on it” zvuči prirodnije
Dobri u školi, loši momci u lovi --- Čini mi se da ovako ima više smisla (Good guys at school...)
Znaš da te loži, bele ruže i pištolji --- “Sets you up” je previše bukvalno prevedeno. “gets you going” zvuči prirodnije
Kada napiješ se sama, i alkohol te slama ponašaš se k'o nenormalna --- “When you drink alone” je “Kada piješ sama”, a “when you get drunk alone” je “kada napiješ se sama”
Hoću sada ovde, ovde, možda hoće i da dođe, dođe --- I want it (I don’t know what they’re referring to, but it’s something) Ako je u pitanju devojka, “he” (on) nema smisla (maybe she also 12 wants...)
Ne zna sama ni šta hoće, hoće, k'o da nema drugi problem --- .... as if she has no
other problems
Beograd pada mrak, opet čuje se beng beng -- Za “mrak” smo već koristili “darkness” na početku. Mislim da originalu nešto ne dostaje, pa pretpostavljam da je trebalo biti “Beograd pada u mrak”
Na grad pada mrak, opet čujem sirene --- “Night is falling in the city” je “noć pada u gradu”, pa mislim da “darkness is falling over the city” bolje odgovara and I hear the sirens again