Hi, thanks for your translation! It's pretty good! Here are some suggestions:

Chorus:
• Ich bin 11 Minuten entfernt (This is good, no need to add "von dir". It's already implemented in the word "entfernt".)

1st stanza:
• Ich denke ich habe deinen Anruf auf dem anderen Telefon verpasst (I don't either know how to express this in a different way.)

• Du bist der verdammte Säure zu meinem Alkali → Du bist die verdammte Säure zu meiner Base or: Lauge ("Säure" is feminine. You can use "Alkali" in German, but it's rather an academic term that rarely appears in common German. So you should take one of the synonyms.)

• meiner Wirbelsäule → meine Wirbelsäule ("Wirbelsäule" is feminine.)

• Und ihre Lippenstiftrechnen blieb nicht kleben → Und ihre Lippenstiftrechnung or: Lippenstiftrechenkunst blieb nicht haften (Maybe this is a metaphor for any type of "game" that this girl played along with the singer: The singer was in love with that girl, and the girl pretended to be in love, too [e.g. by putting on a lot of lipstick to look sexy], but in fact she didn't really loved back. And finally the singer found out that it was just a game. At least, this is my interpretation.)

2nd stanza:
• ich habe Depression → ich habe Depressionen (We use the plural form in German when talking about depressions in general.)

• Alles, was ich will ist deinem Kopf auf meiner Brust → Alles, was ich will, ist deinen Kopf auf meiner Brust (You have to use accusative for the things that you want.)

Refrain:
• erbärmlich (This is a great translation!)

That's all! *thumbs_up*