citlālicue
Sat, 17/12/2016 - 21:29
Muchas gracias por traducir la canción, aunque debo decir esto: se siente un poco forzada en inglés."it will become the Moon-Moon"?
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Proofreading requested
Original lyrics
La lluna no vol
La Lluna plena no vol jugar
a la tarara perquè no sap
i soleta, mes que l'una
es quedarà la Lluna-Lluna.
La Lluna nova diu que no pot
no té espardenyes ni mocador
i per la Pasqua plora que plora,
des de la Terra bé que s'escolta.
La Lluna minva de tant en tant
i d'ensenyar-se no vol parlar
i sola està en les altures
mira jugar perquè tots juguen.
La Lluna creix sense remei
tal com tot: que arriba i que passa després.
Mira-la bé, per si no torna
que és molt capaç. Tot per vergonya.
Submitted by 
Bárbaro on 2015-09-23
Bárbaro on 2015-09-23Translation
The moon don't want
The full moon don't want to play
to the ta-ra-ra- because it don't know
and alone, more than the only one
it will become the Moon-Moon.
The new moon tell that it cannot
It don't have espadrilles or handkerchief
and when easter come, the moon cry and cry,
From the earth its cry is listen very well
The moon wane bit by bit
and like show it self now don't want to talk
and alone is at the high
the moon look our play because want that we all play.
The moon is waxing irredeemably
like everything: come and go then.
Look she/it very well, because she/it can don't go back
that she/it is very able to do that. All for shame.
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Submitted by 
Nelia Navarro on 2016-10-27
Nelia Navarro on 2016-10-27Added in reply to request by Bárbaro
Bárbaro Last edited by Nelia Navarro on 2017-12-16
Nelia Navarro on 2017-12-16 The author of translation requested proofreading.
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It means that he/she will be happy to receive corrections, suggestions etc about the translation.
If you are proficient in both languages of the language pair, you are welcome to leave your comments.
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| 1. | La dansa dels fadrins |
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| 3. | Un nom |
Idioms from "La lluna no vol"
| 1. | de tant en tant |
Comments
citlālicue
Sat, 17/12/2016 - 21:29
Nelia Navarro
Sat, 16/12/2017 - 13:53
¿Alguna sugerencia? ¿Qué frase se podría poner?
About translator
It's song is like a lullaby.
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Espadrille
(espardenyes)
handkerchief=mocador
The moon is name like female: La Lluna