Azura
RaDeNa
jossejosse98
Szombat, 22/04/2017 - 15:34
2nd and 5th line: "This" should be translated into "Det här" and not just "Det"
2nd line: visar instead of visa
6th line: "sjuka" instead of "sjukt"
16th line: Change to "Kanske är jag en annorlunda sort" but if you want "sort" (=type/kind) can be replaced by "art" (=breed/species) or "ras" (=race/breed). These three words can be used in the same way, most of the time at least.
Finally, "Blame it on my A.D.D" should be translated into "Skyll på min ADD", and not "Skylla på min ADD". "Skyll" is the term used when you're encouraging someone to blame. "Skylla" means "to blame" and it doesn't work in this context.
Förslag och rättningar är alltid välkomna.