droomwevers
Duminică, 30/05/2021 - 17:45
Here are a few corrections to your otherwise good English translation:
I lost you. You and me grew up together...
should be:
I lost you. You and I grew up together…
Why had you gone before me much earlier?
should be:
Why did you go so much earlier than I?
you flies hardly
should be:
you hardly fly
but you just cannot to land
should be:
but you just cannot land
Beyound the river Irtish there is a deep ravine.
should be:
Beyond the Irtysh River there is a deep ravine.
The golden eagle sings before he's gone
should be:
The golden eagle sings before departing
you flies hardly
should be:
you hardly fly
but you just cannot to land
should be:
but you just cannot land

Lina Bugulova
LT
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