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Hello, Pla_neta :)
I've read the lyrics to "La Bamba" you posted, and no offense intended, but I have a few comments:
What could be improved:
- In the Los Lobos version, there's an additional line: "Una poca de gracia y otra cosita," meaning "a little grace and something else."
- The ending "Rrrraa-ja-jaa..." is more of a vocal improvisation that doesn't appear in the official score, but could be part of the live version.
- The final "Bamba, bamba..." usually ends with a fade-out or an instrumental bridge.

What's correct:
- The chorus "Para bailar la Bamba..." is repeated as in the original.
- The line "Se necesita una poca de gracia..." is correct and crucial to the message.
- The fragment "Yo no soy marinero, soy capitán" is distinctive and present in every version.
- The repetitions of "Por ti seré..." are consistent with the Los Lobos version.

I hope and hope that you will take my suggestions into consideration and improve this text.
And that's all for now. I hope my comments will help you further develop as a lyrics translator.

Best regards and have a nice day :).
Interpres