I am in love with you
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celalkabadayi on 2015-02-22
kiketake celalkabadayi on 2015-03-01| 1. | Daniela Romo- Amor prohibido (1984) |
| 1. | De mi enamorate |
| 2. | Yo no te pido la luna |
| 3. | Todo, todo, todo |
| 1. | this way and that |
celalkabadayi
Mon, 23/02/2015 - 22:10
de nada amigo
roster 31
Thu, 26/02/2015 - 21:09
Thank you, celalkabaday, for your participation. I would like to point out the following:
1. First verse (and second) - It may be perfect but, for me, is a little bit too long, and not very clear. The original, literally, says, "No, how was I going to think that this was going to happen to me".
I would say, not to repeat and make it shorter, "No, how was I going to think that this would/could happen to me?"
2. In the chorus, "and I never say, my love", should be "and I say 'never', my love". She repeats 'never' to put emphasis in the decision she took in previous verse. You can also say, "and I mean 'never'...".
The first one, a suggestion; the second one, I think it's needed.
celalkabadayi
Fri, 27/02/2015 - 07:59
thank you Rosa.In the second I had thougt that the girl never want to say her feelings, that is : "I don't want to lose you , but I never wanted to say this feeling to you." Can it be like this?
celalkabadayi
Fri, 27/02/2015 - 18:26
yes , O.K, you are right.
thank you Rosa.
celalkabadayi
Sun, 01/03/2015 - 11:09
Hello Rosa, I forgot to correct the first one. I can also shorten the first line as " how could I imagine".
Muchas gracias Celal