Since I don't know any Indian languages, it will be harder for me to make suggestions, but I will at least suggest how the English can be improved.

"spread this smell of her to everywhere" -> "spread her fragrance everywhere"

"Where she open her hair"-- Sometimes prepositions are more abstract than literal, and don't translate literally from one language to another. That 'where' doesn't sound right to me. It could be "from where" or it could be "when." I don't know whether "open her hair" means "uncover her hair" or "spread out her hair." You also left open with an inflection that doesn't match the subject. So, something like "from where she uncovers her hair" or "when she spreads out her hair."

"I want to feel her breathe" is a perfectly fine sentence, but it suggests either checking to see if she is still alive, or lying so closely pressed against her that you can feel her chest moving against you when she breathes. For a slightly less intimate meaning, "I want to feel her breath" suggests that you are close enough to her to feel her exhalation lightly tickle your cheek, but not that you're necessarily touching her.

"Turns this evening seductive" is not actually wrong, but it sounds a little awkward to me. I would prefer "makes this evening seductive." If you are trying to preserve using the same verb in both sentences, you could say "her beauty makes me aroused/ and makes this evening seductive"

"she makes herself to mine" -> "she makes herself mine"

"From now i can't forget her beautiful face" is wrong. If you said "from now on I... " it would be technically correct,but it would still sound awkward. I would prefer "from now on I'll always remember her beautiful face" or "I'll always remember her..." or "I'll never be able to forget her..."

"In to flow of wind" is wrong. "into a/the flow of wind" would be correct. I would prefer "into a flowing wind" even if it's not as direct a translation. But "into a flow of wind" actually sounds a bit poetic too.

"She gone somewhere" is wrong. "She has gone somewhere" or "she went somewhere" would be technically correct, but would still sound a bit awkward. I would prefer "she has gone away" or "she went away."

"but don't tell this anyone else" -> "but don't tell this to anyone else" or "but don't tell anyone else"

"that she also feel the same" -> "that she also feels the same"