crimson_antics
Tue, 03/12/2013 - 21:25
Thanks :bigsmile:
Also, should it be 'staring at the fire'?
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Original lyrics
Ma palun andeks su käest
Täna olen natukene kurb
Täna olen pisut tujust ära ma
Istun kamina ees vahin tuld
Täna tulest lohutust pean otsima
Juba terve nädala
Ekslen teadmatuse sees
Kas kõik on ikka nii kui peab
Kas kõik on korras veel
Nii üle mõistuse kaua
Ei ole kuulnud su häält
Ja igatsen nii
Su puudutusi
Ja palun andeks su käest
Akna taga vihma piserdab
Kogu maailm suvest sajab sügise
Kahjuks sulle näidata ei saa
Kuidas sajab vihma minu südames
Mõelda rahus järele
Peaksin veelkord proovima
Kuid tean et teha endale
Ma midagi ei saa
Submitted by crimson_antics on 2013-11-14
crimson_antics on 2013-11-14Translation
I Ask for Your Forgiveness
Today I´m a bit sad
Today I´m a bit out of temper
I´m sitting in front of fireplace, staring fire
Today I have to look for consolation in fire
Already for I week
I am wandering in cluelessness
Is everything actually how it should be?
Is everything still alright?
So beyond-reasonly long
I haven´t head your voice
And I ache so (much)
for your touches
And I ask for your forgiveness
It sprays rain behind the window
The whole world rains from summer to autumn
Unfortunately I cannot show you
how it rains in my heart
To think over in piece and quiet
I should try again
But I know that to do something for myself
can I not.
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nykti-eoikuia on 2013-12-03
nykti-eoikuia on 2013-12-03Added in reply to request by crimson_antics
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crimson_antics
Tue, 03/12/2013 - 21:25
nykti-eoikuia
Tue, 03/12/2013 - 21:34
and you´re welcome :bigsmile:
nykti-eoikuia
Tue, 03/12/2013 - 21:33
It could but doesn´t have to.
It could also be
I stare (at) fire
But about the article, I´m not sure at all but it seems that without is surely ok.
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