This translation is incorrect in many places.

For example:

כמעט doesn't mean "a bit" it means "almost"
מתארכים לאט doesn't mean "they become deeper" it means "are slowly becoming longer"

The worst error, however, is translating שאוני as "ticking of my watch."

With the letter alef, shaon means my disturbance or distress, not my watch (the word for watch is spelled with an ayin, not an aleph.) The singer is asking whether perhaps her lover is bothered by the same issues that trouble her.

Translating songs and poems is difficult to begin with, because so much nuance, ambiguity and beauty is automatically lost in the transfer from language to language, even if the literal translation is accurate. This problem is exacerbated when the translator is not a careful listener or reader. Be very careful when relying on translations in general, and especially when they are user-generated as on websites like this.