One can't expect an exact translation to fit the rhythm of the song, unless one is very lucky. One can either go for the meaning of the words or try to fit to the rhythm if one wants to sing in another language (in which case I find that much of the original meaning is lost, and the song no longer is the same, unfortunately). I thought the translation was very good as far as accuracy goes, and IMO that's what counts. If you want to change the meaning of the song, you're not accurately translating it, and you're changing the lyrics as far as I'm concerned. If you have to change the lyrics to sing the correct rhythm, that may be an unfortunate consequence of the languages not matching up, but to rate an accurate translation badly because it "doesn't fit the rhythm" is in my opinion obscene. ~Katherine