BlackSea4ever
Di, 29/10/2019 - 21:44
Few clarifications - I'll give you literal and you decide when to adjust:
В стеклянности талой воды мы видим луну -- in the glassiness of the melting water, we can see the moon (or moon is reflecting in the glassiness of the melting water)
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This came out funny - like fingers or matches will become ablaze 😱
Frozen fingers start to break matches, | Which soon will come ablaze --->
Frozen fingers are breaking matches | That will soon be used to set ablaze fires
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Just being picky here:
Now's our day, we know because the stars said so, -- ...because it's written in the stars
Signaled by fire and water, the voice of the Gods. -- ...gaze not voice
So here we go, stepping onto the cobbled bridge, -- ...unfinished bridge not cobbled
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Open to suggestions to improve the translation