Жор - от слова "жрать"

>But maybe it was you she was touching
"история" его касалась, не Аленки.

>Meatballs you know right away
"раскусывать" - в буквальном смысле, не "познавать" - crack

А вот что такое "пп" - полный кобздец?

A couple more corrections since I'm looking at it properly; I'd like to note, English and Russian don't have quite the same sentence structure, so translating word-for-word (as GT often does) can make sentences sound stilted and awkward in English. For example,
> "So beautifully swallowing your jelly" -> "Swallowing your jelly so beautifully"
> "In your Instagram account the desert" -> "Your Instagram account is a desert"
> "Your complexes are zero" -> "You have no complexes.", trying to translate word-for-word from Russian ("Your complexes are equal to zero") just sounds weird and does not really capture the actual meaning of the line.

Some other corrections I'd propose:
> "In social networks" -> "On social networks" (We say "on facebook/twitter" to mean someone being on those networks, not "in")
> "You can't be stopped if you get stuck" -> "заклинит" can be translated as "get hung up on (something)", so what the line means is basically something along the lines of "If you get hung up on something/obsessed with something, you can't be stopped"
> "They have a PP and a simulator in their head" -> here "тренажёр" means "training machine" (used for exercise in a gym), not a simulator
> "But you're charming." -> this is very minor, but I'd suggest adding "very" as a qualifier since the original text includes "сильно".

All in all, good attempt! ^^