Miguel Aceves Mejía - Entre copa y copa (English translation)

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Miguel Aceves Mejía – Entre copa y copa

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Between one drink and another

Between one drink and another my life is over,

Crying drunk for your lost love,

What painful memories brings me your lie,

How it costs tears a betrayal.

I bring sorrow in my soul...

That cannot be kiled by liqueur,

But it's sure that she kills me

The more drunk I am.

I hope that someone pays you

With the same betrayal,

So that when you may get drunk,

You'll know what it means to cry.

I left my home only for loving you,

I left my father and mother just to follow you,

Only for your fault

I succumbed in the misery,

Neither Heaven nor anyone has compassion for me.

I bring sorrow in my soul...

That cannot be kiled by liqueur,

But it's sure that she kills me

The more drunk I am.

I hope that someone pays you

With the same betrayal,

So that when you may get drunk,

You'll know what it means to cry.

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Enjovher on 2018-02-26

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roster 31

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Original lyrics

Entre copa y copa

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Comments

roster 31

Tue, 27/02/2018 - 02:11

Hola, Manu. y gracias por tu bonita traducción.
Te voy a hacer algunos comentarios:
1. Primera estrofa - "my life it's over" --> "my life is over". No necesitas "it" después del sujeto "my life".
Cuarto verso - "What it costs" --> "How it costs..." y no necesitas "for".
2. Segunda estrofa - "sorrows --> "sorrow".
"If I am more drunk", me parece que suena mejor, "the more drunk I am".
"someone pay to you" --> "...pays you".
"And when you become in a drunkard", yo diría,"so that when you may get drunk". Puedes dejar tu expresión, pero no uses "in".

Eso es todo. Mira a ver lo que te viene bien.

Saludos

Enjovher

Tue, 27/02/2018 - 03:16

¡Hola Rosa!

Muchas gracias por las correcciones sugeridas. La verdad es que no fue una letra sencilla, pero aquí presento mi humilde traducción.

Saludos.

roster 31

Tue, 27/02/2018 - 13:08

Muy bien, Enmanuel.
Gracias por seguir mis sugerencias.

Hasta otra