"I don't need moon": 'moons' or 'the moon'
"I've some kisses that light up better than all stars": 'that light me up'
Other than that, it's fine :)
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1. | Pour que tu m'aimes encore |
2. | My Heart Will Go On |
3. | The Power of Love |
"I don't need moon": 'moons' or 'the moon'
"I've some kisses that light up better than all stars": 'that light me up'
Other than that, it's fine :)
I hope there aren't mistakes!!