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Translation
Ruin
In the tearful night
Crushed on a mirror
Thus blows the wind through empty spaces
Life move out
And forgot its leftovers here
I'm crawling out from under the carpet
And I see myself hanging in the mirror
Dead, bloodless and half-rotten
From the gods I came down to pull you up to me
An old stone in the dark night
The soul's vale of tears
I did call you, I commended to you
I begged you for...
But you didn't answer me with any glance
Didn't think of me with any word
You pulled me down to you
And cast me a lot deeper down
And cast me a lot deeper down
The wind kicks this night through empty spaces
And it's the silence, the silence that I carry
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Submitted by 
purplelunacy on 2011-09-25
purplelunacy on 2011-09-25Added in reply to request by 
Ludwig Abendrot
Ludwig Abendrot ✕
Lacrimosa: Top 3
| 1. | Alleine zu zweit |
| 2. | Lichtgestalt |
| 3. | Der Morgen danach |
Comments
purplelunacy
Sun, 13/11/2011 - 15:16
Thanks a lot for your corrections !! =)
Ice300 purplelunacy
Wed, 16/11/2011 - 18:48
Oooh ok ! I'm so sorry, I'm correcting it right away XD !
About translator
Quelsques minors melangés, mais le reste tu l'as traduire très poetique, plus poetique, que quand je l'ai traduirais.
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Life moved out (to undress - enlever qc)
forgot it's leftovers here
I crawled out from under the carpent (I'm creeping out =I'm freaking out -> j'ai vraiment peure)
and see myself hanging in the mirror (mich - myself)
dead, bloodless and half rotten
From the gods I came down to pull you up to me
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The soul's vale of tears (according to dict.cc)
I did call you, I commended to you
I begged you for...
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you didn't think of me with any word
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The wind kicks this night through empty spaces
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