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Translation
La sombra de tu sonrisa
La sombra de tu sonrisa
cuando te hayas ido,
dará color a mis sueños
e iluminará el amanecer.
Mírame a los ojos, mi amor, y ve
todas las cosas bellas que eres para mí.
Nuestra nostálgica estrella
estaba lejos, muy alta.
Una lágrima besó tus labios
Y así hice yo...
Ahora, cuando recuerde la primavera,
todas las alegrías que el amor pueda traer,
estaré recordando
la sombra de tu sonrisa.
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roster 31
Mon, 10/11/2014 - 21:41
Thank you Jamilet for your generosity.
It has been a while, but I read all your poems. I didn't get involved because, in my opinion, rhythm and rhyme are essential in poetry, and that takes time and certain skills, that I may not have. Anyway, I'm going to read "No pares".
Thanks again.
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I just changed the last stanza to subjunctive. That "when" must be "whenever", and the subjunctive agrees with the final future: "whenever that may be".